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Chapter 8 - The Nine-Minute Choice

The video demanded that I choose a location.

Building Four for Nathan.

The eastern container lane for Daniel.

If we divided our team, we weakened both responses.

If we chose wrong, the kidnappers would know exactly where our operators were moving.

I watched the feeds instead of the hostages.

Nathan sat beneath fluorescent lights. Behind him, a ventilation grille vibrated at a steady rhythm.

Daniel knelt on corrugated metal flooring. A chain-link shadow crossed the wall.

Both images carried the same faint mechanical hum.

“They’re close together,” I said.

Elena enlarged the audio waveforms.

The hum synchronized perfectly.

One machine was feeding both rooms.

“Refrigeration compressor,” she said.

The depot had only two refrigerated storage units.

One stood beside Building Four.

The other sat in the eastern container lane.

The kidnappers wanted us to assume the hostages were separated, but both feeds had likely been staged inside adjacent compartments of the same refrigerated container.

The question was which location.

I studied Daniel.

His breathing looked real. Sweat darkened the collar of his undershirt.

Nathan’s image was different.

His chest rose at exactly the same interval each time.

Looped video.

Daniel was live.

Nathan’s feed was old.

“Eastern lane,” I said.

Elena dispatched the primary team underground while sending a smaller visible unit toward Building Four to preserve the illusion that we had chosen Nathan.

The distorted voice returned.

“You always choose the witness.”

The words were almost approving.

That disturbed me.

The speaker knew how I made operational decisions.

Not just my rank or assignment.

My instincts.

Our maintenance cart moved behind the response team. Every vibration sent pain through my leg, but I refused sedation.

We reached the eastern lane with four minutes remaining.

A row of gray containers stood beneath the bright overcast sky. Their doors were closed. None displayed active refrigeration lights.

The compressor hum continued through the tablet.

Elena touched the concrete.

“No vibration.”

The live feed was being transmitted from somewhere else.

A forklift engine roared behind us.

Garrett appeared at the far end of the lane, driving fast with an empty container raised several feet above the ground. He aimed directly toward the operators.

They scattered.

The forklift clipped the maintenance cart and spun it sideways.

I hit the metal railing with my shoulder. My injured leg shifted inside the splint, and white pain erased the lane for a second.

Garrett jumped from the moving vehicle before it crashed into a stack of barriers.

He ran toward the chain-link fence carrying his missing watch and a small black device.

Elena chased him.

I saw what she did not.

A wire extended from the device to the forklift’s battery compartment.

“Bomb switch!” I shouted.

Garrett pressed it.

Nothing exploded.

Instead, every gray container door in the eastern lane unlocked simultaneously.

One door swung open.

Inside were hundreds of navigation modules packed behind false walls, far more than Daniel’s video had shown.

Another container opened.

Then another.

The entire smuggling operation stood exposed.

Garrett stared at the device in disbelief.

Someone had lied to him about what the switch would do.

The distorted voice came through the tablet again.

“Thank you for opening the evidence, Sergeant Voss.”

Garrett’s face collapsed.

He had not been escaping with the device.

He had been manipulated into revealing the cargo.

Elena tackled him before he reached the fence.

Operators secured his arms.

I looked at the nearest open container.

Painted on the interior wall was the same black diagonal mark from the anonymous manifests.

Beneath it, someone had written a date.

The date was seven years earlier.

Two years before Garrett, Marcus, Travis, or Cole had been assigned to Coronado.

The conspiracy had begun long before any of them arrived.

Then the hostage timer reached zero.

Daniel’s live feed went black.

A single message replaced it:

YOU SAVED THE CARGO.

May you like

YOU LOST THE WITNESS.

📖 Discover whether Daniel’s feed truly ended at zero—and why the seven-year-old mark implicated someone from Sarah’s past in CHAPTER 9. 👇

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