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Chapter 3 - The Husband Who Became His Father’s Son

Preston had not always been cruel.

That was the part Naomi hated remembering.

When they first met, he was charming in a soft, self-aware way.

He joked about being born into a family where everyone was named after buildings.

He said he admired Naomi’s discipline.

He listened when she talked about her mother.

He once drove two hours in the rain to bring her Elena’s old notebook after she accidentally left it at home before a hospital presentation.

Naomi loved that version of him.

Or maybe she loved the version of him he became when he was away from Richard.

Because around his father, Preston changed.

His shoulders tightened.

His laugh became smaller.

His opinions became borrowed.

If Richard disliked someone, Preston found reasons to dislike them too.

If Richard praised someone, Preston glowed like a boy.

At first, Naomi felt sorry for him.

Then she became tired of being punished for his need to be approved.

Richard never shouted at Naomi in the beginning.

He corrected.

Suggested.

Reframed.

“Naomi, you’re too attached to details.”

“Naomi, donors don’t need to hear about nursing theory.”

“Naomi, let Preston present this. It lands better from him.”

Preston would squeeze her hand under the table.

“Dad just knows the room.”

Naomi wanted peace.

So she let Preston present slides she had made.

Let Richard open meetings she had scheduled.

Let Beatrice host luncheons with talking points Naomi had written.

Every concession seemed small.

Until her own work no longer sounded like hers.

Beatrice noticed.

Preston’s mother was not cruel like Richard.

She was careful.

Too careful.

She had survived thirty-five years beside Richard by making herself useful and never contradicting him in public.

One afternoon, Beatrice found Naomi alone in the Oakridge library, revising the program copy.

“You should keep your name prominent,” Beatrice said quietly.

Naomi looked up, surprised.

“It’s only a credit line.”

“No,” Beatrice said. “It’s a record.”

The sentence stayed with her.

But weeks later, Beatrice stopped meeting her eyes.

Preston grew colder too.

The closer the gala came, the more praise Naomi received from donors and board members.

People asked for her.

Not Preston.

People emailed her.

Not Richard.

People wanted to know how Elena’s notebook had become a real clinical program.

At a donor dinner, Jonathan Reed, the Oakridge Board chairman, raised his glass and said, “This project exists because Naomi refused to let sentiment remain sentiment. She turned grief into infrastructure.”

The room applauded.

Preston smiled.

But under the table, his hand pulled away from hers.

That night, he said, “You could have redirected some of that.”

Naomi stared at him.

“Redirected applause?”

“Don’t make it sound stupid.”

“It is stupid.”

His face changed.

“You know what I mean. My father has spent decades building this family’s reputation.”

“And my mother spent decades taking care of injured children.”

Preston looked away.

“Everything is a fight with you lately.”

Naomi laughed once.

“No, Preston. Everything is a problem when it doesn’t center your father.”

He slept in the guest room.

The next morning, Richard called her.

“My son is under enormous pressure because of your need to be seen.”

Naomi stood in her kitchen, still in pajamas, staring at the snow outside.

“My need to be seen?”

“You are married now. Your achievements reflect the family.”

“They can reflect both.”

Richard’s voice hardened.

“You are young. You’ll learn.”

That was the first time Naomi truly understood.

Richard did not want her included.

He wanted her absorbed.

And Preston was no longer standing between them.

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He was standing beside his father.

👉 Preston once admired Naomi’s work, but when the world began applauding her instead of the Hawthorne name, admiration turned into resentment.

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