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Chapter 8

No one spoke.

Colonel Hayes continued.

“Private Reed was not transferred here because she needed special treatment. She was transferred here because Range Command requested her evaluation after a civilian competition in Montana, where she stopped an active shooter from two hundred yards away with a borrowed hunting rifle.”

A wave of shock rolled through the soldiers.

Ava’s throat tightened.

She hated this part.

She hated that the worst day of her life had become the reason people looked at her differently.

Colonel Hayes looked at her with quiet respect.

“She saved twelve people that day,” she said. “Including two children.”

No one laughed now.

No one even moved.

Colonel Hayes continued.

“Her record was sealed because she was a minor witness in an ongoing federal case connected to the man who supplied the weapon used in that attack.”

Ava stared at the dust.

This time, the weight of every eye felt different.

Not mockery.

Understanding.

Regret.

Colonel Hayes held up the rifle.

“And today, someone decided to turn her evaluation into a humiliation.”

Harlan snapped, “Ma’am, I never sabotaged—”

“I didn’t say sabotage,” Hayes cut in.

That shut him up.

She looked to the assistant instructor.

“Secure the rifle. Pull the range camera footage. Log every person who accessed that rack this morning.”

“Yes, ma’am.”

Harlan’s face drained.

Because there were cameras.

Because there were logs.

Because arrogance had made him careless.

Colonel Hayes turned to Ava.

“Private Reed, step forward.”

Ava stepped out of Lane Seven.

Colonel Hayes handed her a different rifle.

A clean one.

Checked.

Confirmed.

Then she pointed toward the standard qualification targets.

“Do you wish to continue?”

Ava looked at the soldiers who had laughed.

Some stared at the ground.

One mouthed, “Sorry.”

Then she looked downrange.

May you like

“Yes, ma’am.”

Read Part 9 to see what happened when Ava finally fired with a fair rifle.

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